The Battle

Would you like to hear

Of the terrible night

When I bravely fought the—

No?

All right.

This is when you want to tell people very exiting new and then they say... NO. Which I don't like it when people do that because it makes me sad :   (. Also its just plain rude.

The feelings in this are happy and sad. I say happy because they have something to share. Also sad because the person said no.

The shift to me is when the person says " NO".  Because it changes the whole story.

My opinion on on this poem is that it is funny. Also a bit sad because the person don't want to hear the story.

Yes I would love to share this with my friends. It is a really good poem.